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Monday, January 24th 2005

11:16 AM

Jilted

This story is about an old woman who has gone senile, lost her mind. You follow her thoughts, listen to her memories and she also tells you how she feels. It’s a very confusing story. Basically she’s been engaged twice, but only married once. The first time she was stood up, she was jilted. This was something that she mentioned as she was dying, that she would never be able to forgive. The second time she got married, and had a couple of kids. Her husband died, and so did Hapsey, her kid. There are lucid moments when she realizes that her kid is dead, as is her husband, but then again there are others where she doesn’t. She’s on her deathbed, about to go, when she remembers once again that her kid’s dead, wonders if she’ll be able to find her. She kinda fades out and eases into death. But when she gets there she’s overwhelmed by the grief of her being jilted by her first fiancé and blows out the light. I believe the light would symbolize her soul, or her life. Basically when she blew it out she ended herself in some way, either condemning herself or just ending her life, could be either.
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